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Alone, forgotten, fearing each day,
I wait for the hero who will take me away.
He comes so often, on wings of blue,
I know now my dreams have come true.

Now we soar, away so free,
away from the horrid misery.
I feel a love so real, so true,
I know that he is my savior.

You seem so odd, so strange so distant,
is it something that must happen?
That look in your eye tells me of tidings,
forever evil and forever climbing.

The pain, the anguish, I cannot bear,
too much to see, too much to spare.
Strike me down before I go,
insane with the woe, so distant, let me go.

And now it’s time to say goodbye,
my dear, my darling, love of my life.
I’ll fade away to eternal slumber,
I know your days are now numbered.

I’m waiting, so lost, so scared,
as I was before you dared,
to rescue me so boldly, so brave,
I’m waiting here in the grave.
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Again, sorry if it's in the wrong category. Tell me if I'm wrong D:

Second half to Judgement. I think this is some of the best writing I've ever done.

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:iconkatyana-sabrina:
wow, very nice poem! i like the flow of it, and i can really feel the emotion of the story. and you did that in grade 11? nice.

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#6, Xirak The Untamed Claw, of the ass kicking club [link] ORG-ETERNAL!!


92% of teens moved on to rap music. If you're the 8% that rocks out put this in your signature
:iconfallingembers:
Oh god it took me FOREVER xD It had to be flowy like that, but I can't remember what that type of poetry is called >___<

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To those who understand, I extend my hand. To the doubtful I demand, take me as I am.
Not under your command, I know where I stand. I won't change to fit your plan, take me as I am.
:iconkatyana-sabrina:
*shrug* i dunno lots of types of poetry lol

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#6, Xirak The Untamed Claw, of the ass kicking club [link] ORG-ETERNAL!!


92% of teens moved on to rap music. If you're the 8% that rocks out put this in your signature
:iconfallingembers:
XD You were in grade 11 last year, you should remember!

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To those who understand, I extend my hand. To the doubtful I demand, take me as I am.
Not under your command, I know where I stand. I won't change to fit your plan, take me as I am.
:iconkatyana-sabrina:
>_> i skipped alot of english near the end lol remember?

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#6, Xirak The Untamed Claw, of the ass kicking club [link] ORG-ETERNAL!!


92% of teens moved on to rap music. If you're the 8% that rocks out put this in your signature
:iconfallingembers:
Lol yes, and stop doing that! You're lucky you never had to deal with Lang. Oh god I hate that son of a bitch .__.

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To those who understand, I extend my hand. To the doubtful I demand, take me as I am.
Not under your command, I know where I stand. I won't change to fit your plan, take me as I am.
:iconkatyana-sabrina:
O.o scary person this Lang is? *snort, so yoda there* xD

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#6, Xirak The Untamed Claw, of the ass kicking club [link] ORG-ETERNAL!!


92% of teens moved on to rap music. If you're the 8% that rocks out put this in your signature
:iconfallingembers:
Oh man, he was just the worst human being I'd ever met >___<

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To those who understand, I extend my hand. To the doubtful I demand, take me as I am.
Not under your command, I know where I stand. I won't change to fit your plan, take me as I am.
:iconkatyana-sabrina:
scary. kinda hope i never meet him

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#6, Xirak The Untamed Claw, of the ass kicking club [link] ORG-ETERNAL!!


92% of teens moved on to rap music. If you're the 8% that rocks out put this in your signature

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